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Don't date Vampires

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Fugly sparkles.

I wanted the ending to be sketchy because it kills the seriousness XP
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okay, I guess it's a take on Twilight, classic. I like the drawing shift from one panel to the next, but I'll be honest I don't like those sketchy styles (The last panel), it makes an image for me feel incomplete. The pose on your character in the first panel looks really dull, it doesn't seem very expressive to me. Maybe if the knees were bent, or if she was more hunched or was in a position that said "surprised". The last panel was way more expressive from your first one. Great job on the colouring and shading! Very experimental~