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High Nine'd?

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A meeting of epic proportions.
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

that girls not wearing any pants! AND its potentially tentacle porn! ah well, the Internets full of this stuff. onward to critique!

vision. the theme seems to be a high-five except with 9 tentacles? i was a bit confused at first but nothing wrong with that, i love how they seem to be awesome friends and their faces are very cute (winks for everyone! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/> )

originality - i must say that a tentacle girl highfiving a girl with wolfy ears and a tail is pretty original, especially since its apparently a t-shirt design. originality to the MAX (also this should be made into a t-shirt design)

technique - awesome bubbly shading, i noticed you minimized this one with smaller bubbles so its more subtle, i like it, its different but still very good. the posture of your character on the right is very organic, as are the facial expressions i love it.

impact - whats to say about an epic highfive? with TENTACLES? high because thats just awesome and cool.

now for the negatives (woo...)

the body of the tentacle girl appears to connect awkwardly at her torso (where the shirt meets the blob) its hard to figure out if thats where she becomes humanoid or if shes jelly up her belly also, thats more of an anatomy issue then anything, its almost like her shirt IS her body and shes riding on the blob.

another negative, though i hate to be super picky, is the lack of any shadow, the position of the girls feet on the right are very believable but without shadow it just looks like their floating on a flat background

and finally and this is the most picky part, it looks like they arent highfiving, like its just a second after when it would look like they actually were, it looks more like the tentacle girl is slapping her on the shoulder.

everything else is AWESOME.

(critique over)